You entered my life with such grace,
a charming smile on your face.
I treasure that lovely moment,
To me,its a costly present....
Times spent on your shoulder,
Walking happily together,
Caring like no other,
Oh!!!just like my mother..
Fate paved way for us to part,
But I'm still rejoicing over the past,
As you knocked heaven's door,
Your presence is felt no more................
10 comments:
hey:)
m the first one to scribble in ur blog comments!
:)
hey this s quite a sad thing!but its nice.
do write more poems!
:)
hi reno...
thanks yaar....wl try out writing.....
:-)
cheers for tat first comment.........
hi reno...
thanks yaar....wl try out writing.....
:-)
cheers for tat first comment.........
hey.. i could guess for whom that poem was written for... great work di.. wonderful... keep writing..
I could feel the loss. I know of the person, ya, but your poem would've made me feel the loss even if I hadn't known the person. Lovely work, darling. You certainly don't sound like a first-timer at all! :)
greatt one.. superb.. touching.. i expect many more blogs 4m u.. keep t going colleague.. (gd n8 swt drms).. ;)
hi archu,
its very touching da.
i can feel ur pain.
keep up da. cheers to u.
thanks to alll...
:-)
.wl try writing a poem soooon
hey! archu! its vry nice:)
:)
sema touchin poem:)
great:)
keep it up:)
nice arch dawgggg......
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