Wednesday, September 3, 2008

My bestest friend.....
















You entered my life with such grace,
a charming smile on your face.
I treasure that lovely moment,
To me,its a costly present....

Times spent on your shoulder,
Walking happily together,
Caring like no other,
Oh!!!just like my mother..

Fate paved way for us to part,
But I'm still rejoicing over the past,
As you knocked heaven's door,
Your presence is felt no more................

10 comments:

renold said...

hey:)
m the first one to scribble in ur blog comments!
:)
hey this s quite a sad thing!but its nice.
do write more poems!
:)

archana said...

hi reno...
thanks yaar....wl try out writing.....
:-)
cheers for tat first comment.........

archana said...

hi reno...
thanks yaar....wl try out writing.....
:-)
cheers for tat first comment.........

aki said...

hey.. i could guess for whom that poem was written for... great work di.. wonderful... keep writing..

Neeru said...

I could feel the loss. I know of the person, ya, but your poem would've made me feel the loss even if I hadn't known the person. Lovely work, darling. You certainly don't sound like a first-timer at all! :)

Guru The Lion said...

greatt one.. superb.. touching.. i expect many more blogs 4m u.. keep t going colleague.. (gd n8 swt drms).. ;)

Anusha said...

hi archu,
its very touching da.
i can feel ur pain.
keep up da. cheers to u.

archana said...

thanks to alll...
:-)
.wl try writing a poem soooon

M@nik said...

hey! archu! its vry nice:)
:)
sema touchin poem:)
great:)
keep it up:)

vicky said...

nice arch dawgggg......